Posts tagged ‘food person’

Ohhh Myyy

I think, after coming in to see you, that my essay is alright.  I think it is at a B level because my analysis of Chang was extensive.  The reason I was held back was that I lacked Biographical material.

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Food Person Essay

1) Organization: my essay does not a flow as it should.  Also my transistions are weak.

2) I didn’t find a book source.  I’m planing to use David Chang’s cookbook, but it isn’t available online and I didn’t check the library.

3) And like always, I need to fix my grammar.